Camera work, audio...GREAT type and the last bit of info VERY BAD, redo the last page and title the front of the video the same as your link name, please then submit to jacob one slide has (210) another 210 xxx-xxxx we must be consistent I would love you to use AP style, if you don't know when you are at school have an editor PROOF the works typed on the video we should not have names within (blah): "(blah) and caps
Camera work, audio...GREAT
ReplyDeletetype and the last bit of info VERY BAD, redo the last page and title the front of the video the same as your link name, please then submit to jacob
one slide has (210) another 210 xxx-xxxx we must be consistent
I would love you to use AP style, if you don't know when you are at school have an editor PROOF the works typed on the video
we should not have names within (blah): "(blah) and caps
Okay I made the requested changes and updated the video. Its the same link if you want to check to see if everything is right.
ReplyDeleteYep, the type looks better numberers are consistent, good follow thru.
ReplyDeleteLets get this to jacob!
Okay I emailed it to him earlier before I went to school just forgot to comment on here.
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