Tuesday, February 5, 2013

Erica Gomez- Sandbelt


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4 comments:

  1. that kid with a broken heartFebruary 5, 2013 at 8:35 PM

    Good job Erica! :D

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  2. Tricia BuchhornFebruary 7, 2013 at 3:34 PM

    Angel, this is not a critique, it is a observation. be specific on what you like or don't like.
    Tricia

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  3. that kid with a broken heartFebruary 11, 2013 at 6:42 PM

    I like the beginning, the way the guy is talking about sand belts and then shows a still of sand belts.

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  4. that kid with a broken heartFebruary 11, 2013 at 6:50 PM

    The only part that isn't really necessary are the smiley faces because its not really "news" appropriate. The words can also be placed better so there are not just right there in your face. But overall I like it.

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